#1
This ones a bit about me getting my girlfriend in trouble and her always doing the opposite for me. Plus a bit of the fact that I'm reading Romeo and Juliet in class.

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He looks at her and he adores
Watches her until she departs
She's just the angel that lives next door
He's no saint but he's trying so hard
For her he'd give his life and much more
But he can never forget his scars

The angel that fell and the sad damned saint
Who fell in love but there love was taint
And she's lost her wings so she can stand
With him in his world and hold the saint's hand

She can't love him without effect
Can she take the results of her actions?
All this pain she must accept
For what is now just an attraction
Isn't this the saint for whom she wept?
Can she leave for higher satisfaction?

The angel that fell and the sad damned saint
Who fell in love but there love was taint
And she's lost her wings so she can stand
With him in his world and hold the saint's hand

Lovers born of hell and halo
Forever together they'll stay, though
There constantly torn apart
Lovers who knew at first sight
That even in their own worst night
Nothing could dampen there heart

The angel that fell and the sad damned saint
Who fell in love but there love was taint
And she's lost her wings so she can stand
With him in his world and hold the saint's hand
(x2)

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#3
Absolutely amazing...Was a pleasure to read ^^.

10/10
Originally Posted by apocalypse13
What, does singing "Moderfukin death, Sat@n is t3h 1337!!" make you feel tough?


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