#1
This is just an idea for a song, I pretty much made it up as I was playing it, but it's not completely improvised. I'm gonna mess around with it for a while before I turn it into a song. Links in sig (weakest moment) Song bleed, it's the first song on the list.
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Last edited by stratkat at Jan 9, 2007,
#2
Sounds pretty good. Its hard to judge it when its just guitar because even with simple guitar it could turn into an awesome guitar. Not so sure about when you pause but that all depends on how it sounds with everything else. I think it would sound better if those parts were more emphasized but of course you could do that with drums as well so it would sound more dramatic. This has potential though seems like it would be pretty easy to add some catchy vocals to it. Good job I hope it turns out well.

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