#1
All alone is this world
No one is there to guide me
Throughout this pain and misery
Someone please come
And help through my life

As I sit here feeling all alone
I wonder what’s good in my life
All I realize then is that
I’m all alone
I’m all alone
I’m all alone

All alone is this world
No one is there to guide me
Throughout this pain and misery
Someone please come
And help through my life

What can I do
What should I do
To get rid of this feeling
How am I going to
Get through this
I’m all alone
I’m all alone
I’m all alone

All alone is this world
No one is there to guide me
Throughout this pain and misery
Someone please come
And help through my life

All I want is all I need
What I need from you
Is just a little attention
So I can get through this pain
Of being All alone…


first song ive ever written and im sorry if i just wasted a few minutes of your time
#2
it's cool but it would rhyme better if you put something like
All alone is this world
No one is there to guide me
Throughout this pain and misery
Someone please come
Someone please come and find me

just my opinion though keep it if you like the way it is. but always remeber flow is important.
#3
Quote by Mike9200
it's cool but it would rhyme better if you put something like
All alone is this world
No one is there to guide me
Throughout this pain and misery
Someone please come
Someone please come and find me

just my opinion though keep it if you like the way it is. but always remeber flow is important.


Dude nothing rhymes here !
Looking for a new sig!
#5
I'm sorry to say this, but this is very cliche. Every line here has been done before. I would suggest you scrap this and write something else, use your own ideas and a different perspective for things like this. If you need any more help, just let me know.
Cause I love feelin' dirty
And I love feelin' cheap
And I love it when you hurt me
So drive those staples deep