These are a few things ive been messing around with. They would probably be used in a video game. I have one for a boss battle, one for like a hometown calm thing and one for an intro story or something.
Game Soundtrack.zip
Alta Vera - My real life alternative rock band.
Ashen Spire - My personal metal band.

Super Mario, F-Zero & Dragonball Z covers!

PSN: whatev27

Let me ask you, does a machine like yourself ever experience fear?

dude i love it! you really captured that video game sound. reminds me or final fantasy music almost.....awesome!
I'm sorry, but none of those caught my attention for more than about 20 seconds.

Your composition is lax, and you don't really have much to exemplify the feelings of each song, they all sound very generic, nothing really standing out. I've been composing music for independent games (Mostly RPGs), since I was 19, so I have an idea of what I'm talking about.

You just have to find your sound and work with it. Keep trying!
NOTE: I will crit your songs back, I'm Dial up, be patient.