#1
Hey guys, I was just messing around and decided to record this. Its a pretty simple song, but still very chill. Just close your eyes and let donkeyman take you away....

And also, hows the recording quality, etc?

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#2
I like the drums at the start, and the guitar riffs and the overall sound. Very professional, with nice soothing melodies and some good out of tune bits that make it a bit different.
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#4
Man this thing is neat. I like this.

By the way, the drums in this song kick ass.
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#5
Pitch Shifter? sweet... I wish I could use mine in a song.

Listening to your song, described the feeling I had all today... Because today, I've been mostly chillin. I think I may ask everyone this... What do you use for drums?

Overall, its a great song, and don't ive up on it yet, its short, give it a bridge or something.

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#6
Hah, wow thats pretty good that you could tell its a shifter!
As for drums, its the drum machine on my 8 track recorder, then i beef em up with kristal or audacity.

Its funny how good it turned out because I totally just threw some chords together and then recorded everything in one take.

The one thing I was wondering was if its too muddy? Like a newb i added a lot of reverb, but i guess it fits.
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#8
Yea i thought there was some clipping, can you tell what it was, cause nothing came up on my meters.
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#9
Your drum sound kind of reminds me of led zeppelin's style where they distorted and echoed it. I liked the drums, the second guitar part was nice. I think you could sing on it and it would be pretty good song. Oh, and i liked the pelican picture.
#10
man that was like lead zepplein and pink floyed had decided to play together! that was really great. the only thing i didnt like was the popcorn-like guitar at the beginning and the end. maybe take it down an octave or something. but other than that it was great!
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#11
The one thing I was wondering was if its too muddy?

Yes, but don't get me wrong. It adds charm. There's a clean, beautiful guitar swimming around, with a gutteral bass in the shadows. Keep it that way.

Definitely has a vibe you can only find in SoCal, especially San Diego. I hope to move there by summertime.

P.S.
I enjoyed the steel drums in there, too! Creative, without being arrogant. Nice.
#12
Wow thank you! I'm not sure i know what you mean about "SoCal vibe" lol but yes its great here.
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