#1
Please give me some crit it would realy help im only just starting out in the wonderful world of lyric writing

Every one has problems
Some never get fixed at all
Next fall
Everything will seem so small

You can’t run
You can’t hide
From the feelings inside
You can’t run
You can’t hide
It’s up to you to decide

I’ve got a solution
Hey even a revolution
I won’t sin
It takes me to win

I can see the light
I’ve got the tools
I’m the armoured knight
I don’t care bout rules

You can’t run
You can’t hide
From the feelings inside
You can’t run
You can’t hide
It’s up to you to decide

I’ve found my way
I’ve found the path,
Not gunna stray
No way no way
#4
rhyming pattern in all the verses dont match but thats not a big problem it will be sure good with the music . try to expand both verses and chorus a bit . it will make it more good
Hi
#5
the ryyming iregularities symbolise the diffrent ways the person tries to run away from his problems but then the problems always catch up with him sybolised by the chorus