hey, this is a tune i came up with.
its only short, but please have a listen and any crit is welcome!


the song name is untitled and everything u can hear i played

Wow, great job. The rhythm part reminds me a bit of Yellow Ledbetter by Pearl Jam. I like the rhythm tone, but the lead could use a little work, I think it sounds a bit trebley and needs to be a bit smoother. Great job on all the lead parts though. The double guitar part is really cool but at times its a bit overwhelming.

Crit mine?