#1
hey, this is a tune i came up with.
its only short, but please have a listen and any crit is welcome!

www.purevolume.com/drdoo

the song name is untitled and everything u can hear i played

cheers
#6
Wow, great job. The rhythm part reminds me a bit of Yellow Ledbetter by Pearl Jam. I like the rhythm tone, but the lead could use a little work, I think it sounds a bit trebley and needs to be a bit smoother. Great job on all the lead parts though. The double guitar part is really cool but at times its a bit overwhelming.

Crit mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=501094&highlight=diary