#1
Staring at the ceiling
Waiting here for nothing
Watching as life
Passes me by

In this moment of despair
I think to myself
This isnt fair
Bad things always happen to me

[chorus]
If i dont belive in myself
I cant achieve anything
Noones here for me
I dont need anyone...
TO BRING ME DOWN!

Things break into me
Into my soul
They find my weakness
They wont let me let go

I dont want anything
More than to live my life
I dont need anything
Because things are sacrifice

[chorus]
If i dont belive in myself
I cant achieve anything
Noones here for me
I dont need anyone...
TO BRING ME DOWN!
BRING ME DOWN!
STOP BRINGING ME DOWN!
WONT BRING ME DOWN!
You wont bring me down again!
#2
Sounds like that one Simple Plan song I used to like when I was like 9. I am personally not a fan of the gerne anymore but from a lyrical point of view, it's not bad.

One thing tho,

I know the song title is "Bring Me Down" but you dont have to repeat it three times in the chorus. It gets repeatitive and your listener/reader would get annoyed. Try switching it too something catchy to "hook."

Again, not half bad.
#3
could someone give me lessons on how to improve it, i used to write songs, i sucked at it, stopped getting inspiration, and then got inspiration for this one from parents. but i dunno how to fix it. i want it to be a rock or metal song though.