#3
Cheers man ^^^

I'm the guitarist/singer in this band by the way lol.

Hence the bumping of this thread

Your songs are awesome by the way, just had a listen now.
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#4
Please can someone else please crit
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#5
I have to say a pretty decent the drums need to be turned a bit and to the center more. The guitar and vocals both need to boosted a lot, I can barely hear what you're saying. Overall a decent song, I prefer the song when it gets faster.
#6
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I have to say a pretty decent the drums need to be turned a bit and to the center more. The guitar and vocals both need to boosted a lot, I can barely hear what you're saying. Overall a decent song, I prefer the song when it gets faster.



I agree with everything he said. The song is good even when it's not going fast though. I think you have a great song here.....just change those things and you'll be good to go. Keep up the good work!

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#7
Thanks anymore?
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#8
Good stuff, the vocals and guitars are not loud enough. Is there a bass?
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#9
Thanks for all your crits people, yeah the levels are pretty screwed up, it was only a rough recording so we didn't sort it out.

Any more crits please?
#11
Oh god!
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thank you for your crit
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#12
Good song, turn up the vocals and guitar as everyone else said, and I'm not big on the vocals, but theyre not bad and good clean to growl transition.
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#13
singing in tune would help? no offense, it just would. and the tone of the snare drum sounds more appropriate for reggae than this, otherwise, i like it.
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#14
Quote by kyucide
singing in tune would help? no offense, it just would. and the tone of the snare drum sounds more appropriate for reggae than this, otherwise, i like it.



yeah, it all needs work still, hopefully we will get it tight soon.
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#15
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singing in tune would help? no offense, it just would. and the tone of the snare drum sounds more appropriate for reggae than this, otherwise, i like it.


yeah i know. I'm starting singing lessons next week
#16
The song sounds pretty cool. Reminds me a lot of Tool, which is great. The vocals definitely need to be louder and with a bit more range (like how Tool have the louder, higher vocals on their choruses). Keep it up!
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#17
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The song sounds pretty cool. Reminds me a lot of Tool, which is great. The vocals definitely need to be louder and with a bit more range (like how Tool have the louder, higher vocals on their choruses). Keep it up!



thanks , tool are one of out biggest influences.
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#18
The only instrument I can hear clearly is the drums. The vocals and guitar are way too low, and I don't even know if bass exists in that song.

The song sounds pretty cool, though. Make everything louder and adjust your EQ's so everything comes through in the mix, and it should sound great.
#19
yeah. I would say just to tighten it up, but it sounds like it could be a pretty good song. Just turn down drums, tighten snare, turn up vocals and maybe fix in a few places, but it sounds like it could be really cool if it was mixed right and everything. You could easily adjust it. Good luck and KEEP ROCKIN! Check out my music too https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=522091
#20
Quote by gunsnroses89
yeah. I would say just to tighten it up, but it sounds like it could be a pretty good song. Just turn down drums, tighten snare, turn up vocals and maybe fix in a few places, but it sounds like it could be really cool if it was mixed right and everything. You could easily adjust it. Good luck and KEEP ROCKIN! Check out my music too https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=522091



thanks dude ^

we shall have some live recordings soon hopefully we shall have improved
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#24
Yea i would agree with fixing of volumes definatley the bass. And yea the Snare does sound a abit slack. but i think you'll have a cool sound when sorted!
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#25
thanks guys
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#26
im listenin 2 it atm n the drums r a bit of an overkill, everything else needs 2 seriously b turnd up!
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#27
oh and no offence but the singin sounded a tad flat. but hey better than wat im capable of. and do u even hv a bass player?!
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#28
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oh and no offence but the singin sounded a tad flat. but hey better than wat im capable of. and do u even hv a bass player?!



yes i'm the bass player!

they just did a jason newstead to me my bass is real quiet
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#29
I can't hear the vocals, but I think the rest of it sounds good.

What microphone are you using?
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