#1
You analyse things, social gatherings, events, people in life
However hard you try, you seem to question
What is reality and what is not.

It seems like your paranoid friend was right
There is something more to life
With his philisophical ways of thinking
Then again, he's clocked up thrity spliffs alone this week
And i don't think he's alright.

Considering his social background
He's just a misfit who'd wished he'd had a purpose in life
But then again, don't we all?
Maybe, just maybe, a psychologist could figure out
How philosophy came to mind?
#3
You analyse things, social gatherings, events, people in life
However hard you try, you seem to question
What is reality and what is not.

instead try difference between reality and illusions of this life


It seems like your paranoid friend was right
There is something more to life
With his philisophical ways of thinking
Then again, he's clocked up thrity spliffs alone this week
And i don't think he's alright.


this is really good


Considering his social background
He's just a misfit who'd wished he'd had a purpose in life
But then again, don't we all?
Maybe, just maybe, a psychologist could figure out
How philosophy came to mind?


this one is expressed in a beautiful manner . overall good job 9/10 . i am deducting 1 point so that u will try to write much better next time.
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