#1
Hey guys, wrote this one really quick but it one of my favs that weve done, but we would love to hear some criticism, no matter how harsh!
www.myspace.com/solacetheband, song is Happy Song (will be titled respectably soon)
He came dancing across the water
Cortez, cortez
What a killer.
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http://zoso.dmusic.com/ <--Check me out at
Last edited by zoso626 at Jan 13, 2007,
#3
I like it. Especially the singing, a good voice is always needed
#4
This is pretty badass bud. Recording quality is excellent.. wonderful voice... very catchy tune. Good transition between verse and chorus. The drums are basic, but do the job perfectly. This is just a very tight song, overall. There's really nothing much negative I can say about it. The lyrics are good as well, from what I could make out. It's hard to understand a lot of them, but the lack of announciation (sp?) works very well with your voice and song style. Excellent song bro, keep it up. 9/10 (just because I'm an asshole)

http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=501899
crit mine maybe?
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#5
thanks guys, ill get a critin here asap, btw this is c4c didnt mention that
He came dancing across the water
Cortez, cortez
What a killer.
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http://zoso.dmusic.com/ <--Check me out at
#6
that's great man, you sound like a guy I know(vocally) and he's released a couple albums keep it up
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#7
Wow, you guys should really look forward to hitting it big in the future. This song was, as you stated, an extremely happy song Nothing negative to say about it! I was wondering what you use to record, and do you have, or use a studio?

If you don't mind, please C4C https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=503803
#9
Quote by Airguitarmaster
I really love it.. It has a beatles feel imo.. haha. Vocals are outstanding i love ur voice. its great.


Really I thought it had a much more Pink Floyd feel to it. One of the greatest songs I have heard off of UG
#10
ted, you may have listened to the first song by accident :-D
He came dancing across the water
Cortez, cortez
What a killer.
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http://zoso.dmusic.com/ <--Check me out at
#11
damn dude, you guys are real good. you're gonna be famous and shit for sure
Gear:
Epiphone G-400
Fender Strat
Washburn BT-2
Marshall MG100HDFX
Crybaby
Digitech Hendrix Pedal (Multi-Effects)
Blues Driver
Tube Screamer TS-9
M-Audio Jam Lab
Digitech GNX4 Guitar workstation
#12
So I can't seem to think of anything except to say that this is great. I don't usually like this sort of style but its so catchy. All the instruments sound great they are all perfectly balanced with each other. Quality is amazing, especially in my snazzy little headphones. The vocals sound awesome too. I like how your voice just seems to flow effortlessly.

crit mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=504164
#13
Wow! I like, zoso. Admit it, though. This song is to get the panties in the room a bit, um... humid?

This sounds like the kind of song played at the end of the show "Scrubs," during the moral of the story part. Very nice.
#14
haha zigzag i can totally see that. Yah btw all of this was recorded at our home studio that we invested about a grand in(plus a 1200$ computer). As soon as we get out of highschool we are gonna hopefully make the studio even better.
He came dancing across the water
Cortez, cortez
What a killer.
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http://zoso.dmusic.com/ <--Check me out at
#15
That was good. I like the guitar interplay. It reminds me of Patience by GNR and some Beattles songs.
Gear
BC Rich guitars
Crate amps


Heres my thrash song guitar demos - Thrash demos