#1
Yea...i've been tyring to write a song for my girlfriend Ema but i can never seem to find words that go with eachother to make a song actually listenable...Sometimes i feel that i need a beat to write/think of a song.

I find that when i walk to school, i'll be listening to Lil Jon or The Beatles or even Justin Timberlake (Flame away >.> for my mix in music >.> i get all kinds of lyrics in my head, i'll start singing them in my head, but then i sing them out loud to myself, they just sound shitty.

Or i get some lyrics and they'll actually sound GOOD. But they don't sound good out loud. Is this normal....or am i just going crazy? But when i actually sit down and think of lyrics, i'll get words and phrases but they never can co-exist because they sound horrible together.

I'll be in class and all of a sudden i'll get words that sound awsome...i write them down, sing to myself sound horrible >.>.....

What can i actually do? I really like the "Beats" Lil Jon makes, i like the voice of Justin Timberlake and i like the feeling i get when i listen to The Beatles (Mainly "Help!")

I find the most insperation iget is listneing to music..but at the same time i find it a wee bit hard to conentrate....

Could anyone give me any tips and/or help/
#2
maybe you should just simple it down a bit, lil john, beatles, timberlake...dont combine everything you listen too, if you never wrote a song before best start of simple you can always add to it later on
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