Chris falsetto's parts of the chorus. You tried something different which is good, but unfortunately the chorus' altered melody didn't workout so well. Keep at it.
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ok listening now. Very mellow and a warm recording. what do you use to record equipment wise?? Good overall, try sticking a girls stocking over your mic, or get a pop filter, there's a lot of unwanted pops in the vocal track. Apart from that, I like this.

Can you crit my cover of Nick Drakes 'from the morning'... it's very similar in tempo and tone. in my sig!!