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Pretty good overall. I like it and I'm not the metal fan I used to be. The music is interesting. Would benefit from a vocal. I wonder if it would sound better with a little less bass. Maybe a boost in the mid range. I'm just musing on that bit. Good effort. If you do anything more with it I would be interested in listening too it.

Would you mind reviewing Calico Girl?

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