#1
Okay so i've been writing for my song, this is probably our least cool sounding hehe but it's the one that I have currently recorded.

It's not fully structured (I.e. no solo) and this is pretty much just made for bandmates purposes of hearing the riffs.

It's all done in one take, no metronome nothing haha just a rough draft of a song idea with all the riffs put together. Parts of it are 9/8 most 4/4.

Anyway, here it is

http://www.soundclick.com/andyg
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#2
Not bad at all. Grabs your attention right away. It needs a vocal. Pretty good effort. By the way put the name of your song here. I notice you have two on your site and I wasn't sure which was which. I figured it out but just for future reference. Good job let me know when you finish it.

Would you mind reviewing Calico Girl?

http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=500244
#3
Thx Yeah we're a full band at the moment, in search of a vocalist (last we auditioned was horrendous)

Tried to write it with the vocals in mind though. Ah sorry yeah i'll do that next time.
My Band - Validus - Our Myspace
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-Carvin DC400/DC200/DC727/CM140
-Ibanez JEM
-Gibson Exp. Gothic
-Custom V (Inc.)
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-Splawn Nitro
-Carvin x100b
-Marshall JCM2k
-Meteora M.A.K. 3k
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-Engl PRO 4x12
-Marshall 4x12/2x12
-Carvin 4x12
#4
You need a slaughterhouse of pinch harmonics, That would give it more of a metal feel i'd say.. Plus it would really sound badass then. IMO
#5
Dude the riff in Carvin Pup Test that starts around 38 sec is tight! You should do something with that!
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