#1
i got a idea for what is potentiolay a good song the general idea of the song is this guys is always getting presured into doing things he doesn't want to do he wants to cut out of thisw cycle

i just can't seem to get the song started has anyone out here got any tips for me it would realy realy help of corse crit for crit
#2
listen to "under pressure" from queen/david bowie
Remember when we were in Africa? -Jim Morrison