#1
u take the pain and pressure
u take my life
all i did was care for u
all i did was care

iv given u all my love
wish i could have given more
cant replace what u have taken
cant replace love u took

when will u learn pain dosent leave
it stays in mind, body, soul
i will always greve

i will always care
it seems i am the only one
now im gunna run
with this life i dnt care


iv written the chorus its the 1st verse at the top
err i need asmuch help as u can give please comment lol
thnx xxx
#3
Quote by x_rox
My comment - learn grammar


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Grammar is the system of a language. People sometimes describe grammar as the "rules" of a language; but in fact no language has rules. If we use the word "rules", we suggest that somebody created the rules first and then spoke the language, like a new game. But languages did not start like that. Languages started by people making sounds which evolved into words, phrases and sentences. No commonly-spoken language is fixed. All languages change over time. What we call "grammar" is simply a reflection of a language at a particular time.


Also.. the 'grammar' isn't bad it's just bad spelling and some 'text message speak'.
#4
Quote by x_rox
My comment - learn grammar


My comment, try showing some respect, perhaps show the writer where they went wrong, no? Or you could try not replying with pointless things.

Anyway threadstarter read teh FAQ, no begging.
Filth, pure filth... That's what you are.