#1
ok this is my first song. if it looks familiar its cos earlier to day i accidentaly posted it in the "songwriting contests" thread and then i deleted it. i got a new profile too, my old username sucked

please bear in mind that im only fifteen!


Effigy
I am a living effigy
A substitute for the real me
Im not blind but I cant see
I am a living effigy

Take your anger out on me
Ill be your living worry beads
Beat me burn me I don't care
Im not really there

Beat me burn me pound me churn me
Slash me hack me kill me slowly
x2

im not blind but I cant see
a substitute for the real me
my emotions are a pounding sea
beneath this living effigy
#2
Wohohoho... This is some high-quality stuff.

I can honestly say... Yeah, these are the best lyrics Ive seen on UG.
#3
Quote by Zuka
Wohohoho... This is some high-quality stuff.

I can honestly say... Yeah, these are the best lyrics Ive seen on UG.


thanks! wrote another song too, its called "vaginamyte" not sure if i should put it up though!

also, question about a name for my band, which is better AD/HD or Sgt. Pecker's Bony Parts?
#4
Neither, both are too cheesy as names for bands. How about Shit For Brains? (i'm being serious) As for the song it's ok, I know bands that could write those kind of lyrics and still get a decent amount of fans. However, they're way too short, unless of course it's a purposely short song. Also, I think people on here prefer lyrics to be rather metaphorical and really thoughtful, whereas these are more kinda obvious and in your face types. Hope that helped you :S
#5
thanks but i think im gonna go with AD/HD! i know the songs too short but hey what can you do? the drummer is writing songs kinda like you described, we play everything not just in your face songs. i'll upload some mp3's eventually