#1
Sorry if i made spelling mistakes


Speaking out a different way
Thinking things I can not say
Breathing in the clouded air
Ignoring you wasn’t fair
So this is why I’m speaking out
While I’m not forgetting about
All the bad things I said
Can’t you see my regret?

Every night and every day
All these words I want to say
Just can’t roll out of my mouth
The cold and bitter pain…
Even though, I feel the shame
And even though I am to blame
These excuses need to be said
But they just won’t roll out…

The feeling of dieing inside
All emotions fighting their fight
Please stop now, stop fighting please
Give me my inner peace.

On my field I’m the prey
A hundred excuses left to say
But they just won’t come out
The cold and bitter pain…
Even though I regret
Every single word I said
I want to take them back
But I just… can’t..

Can you forgive me??
Nothing I did, nothing I said..
There is nothing I don’t regret.

So this is how we die inside
All emotions fighting their fight
Please stop now, stop fighting please
Bring me back my inner peace
Before hatred takes over me!!!!!
#3
I really liked the rhyming scheme in this. However, there were some instances(may only be small)that stopped the flow of the piece. i.e "ignoring you wasn't fair", would be better as "ignoring that you wasn't fair" because that extra syllable makes it flow alot smoother. There's a few other instances: "Just can’t roll out of my mouth
The cold and bitter pain…", would imo be better as " Just won't come out of my mouth, the coldness and bitter pain". I dunno whatever floats you boat, but that's what I say would need looking at.