#1
Here's A Look At A Song I've Just Finished Working On
So Tell Me What You Guys Thinks And I Might Make Some Changes
To Make It Better Hopefully

"We Called It Quits"

You Ask Me If I Care
I Say Yeah But I Still Ain't Sure
Girl You Wouldn't Even Dare
Try Runnin Off Through That Door
Things Have Been Alright
But Girl Your Still Uptight
And I Can't Deal With All Your
Arguments...Tonight!

Today's The Day I Tell You
Just How I Feel
Everything I Said Was True
Everything That I Felt Was Real
But I Got One Thing To Admit
Me And You Just Don't Fit
And I Think It's Time
That We Called It Quits!

Last Night You Stormed Off
And Walked Out The Door
But Girl It's Your Loss
You've Lost Your War
Now Im Sure
That I Don't Need You Anymore!

Today's The Day I Tell You
Just How I Feel
Everything I Said Was True
Everything That I Felt Was Real
But I Got One Thing To Admit
Me And You Just Don't Fit
And I Think It's Time
That We Called It Quits!

When We Met You Said
It Was Right
But Now The Loves Dead
And All We Do Is Fight!

Today's The Day I Tell You
Just How I Feel
Everything I Said Was True
Everything That I Felt Was Real
But I Got One Thing To Admit
Me And You Just Don't Fit
And I Think It's Time
That We Called It Quits!

Thanks Guys
#2
Decent words, but what kind of music is this going to?

Lryics are only as good as the music accompanying them.. (unless just poetry)

GOOD THOUGH!
#3
Not bad. Its pretty cool that its a song about dumping a girl. Don't hear many of those.
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#4
Hey Dude

Well When I Was First Writin It, It Was Indie Sorta But Then Again After
Looking At It And Singing It It Could Be Like Pop/Rock Punk/Rock So I
Dunno Any Suggestions With What I Could Do With It Musicaly Would Be
Great
#5
If it was my song: -

First verse acoustic (just guitar maybe a solid bass line i.e one pluck per note)

Second verse electric comes in with rythmic bass (ala radiohead fake plastic trees)

The build to a cresendo with a f^^k of guitar solo to finish.....

but it yours man....
#6
Quote by Qoasis
If it was my song: -

First verse acoustic (just guitar maybe a solid bass line i.e one pluck per note)

Second verse electric comes in with rythmic bass (ala radiohead fake plastic trees)

The build to a cresendo with a f^^k of guitar solo to finish.....

but it yours man....


Dude Im Liking The Sound Of That I Should Be Able To Write All That In No Time
Cept The Solo They Ain't My Forte Lol But Should Be Gd Thanks For The Help Dude
#8
Thx Dude Well I Could Use A Hand On The Solo Cause Like I Said
Everything Else Should Come Pretty Easy Cept That

Nah Scotland Half Way Round The World Lol
You From America?
#9
no half way round the world in Birmingham (UK)!

like fratellis? I think there f**king awsome, 60's oasis from Glasgow!

Got a band?
#10
Do you have to put a capital letter at the begining of each word, its not even proper grammar, hard to read and 'AnOying'
Last edited by kidsilcon at Jan 14, 2007,
#11
Nice!

I Love The Fratellis Goin To See Them On Febuary The 25th
At The Corn Exchange In Edinbrugh!
Can't Wait For That!

Oasis Are Amazing Aswell Love Those Guys Live Forever Is My Song Lol
#12
Quote by kidsilcon
Do you have to put a capital letter at the begining of each word, its not even proper grammer, hard to read and 'AnOying'



Dude you wanna crit anything crit the song not me or my typing methods thanks
#13
That's really funny, someone from Liverpool talking about "proper" (probably means correct) grammer! What next?
#14
Quote by Qoasis
That's really funny, someone from Liverpool talking about "proper" (probably means correct) grammer! What next?


A Brummie who isn't ugly?
Tears in waves, minds on fire
Nights alone by your side
#15
Quote by Qoasis
That's really funny, someone from Liverpool talking about "proper" (probably means correct) grammer! What next?

No i don't, i mean proper grammar and i stick with what i said.
#16
WOAH, REGION WAAARRR!


Anyways, nice song dude. Like mentioned before, a song about dumping someone instead of the other way around is an interesting concept.
#17
Quote by kidsilcon
No i don't, i mean proper grammar and i stick with what i said.


you got me, thats what you get for trying to be clever
#18
Lol

crazy region war right i've stopped typin the way you didn't like
but next time keep it to yourself i wasn't criting you for anything
so crit the song and not anything else plz

and gonk thanks dude i know i thought bout it it's usually the other way around
and to be honest it's getting boring lol so i thought i would get one up for the guys
#19
Quote by fronkpies
A Brummie who isn't ugly?


I lost my good looks are under four bricks in scouseland somewhere

only went into McDonalds and they were gone....