#2
Thanks for the crit!

I like this, it's good! It gets a little repetitive after awhile but that can easily be taken care of with vocals. I can see the vocals fitting in well. Good song you have here!
#3
yeah its not done, i still need a some sort of chorus he just told me,and that is gonna be the verse,shortended too so dont worry
#4
Wow that's kinda strange, a little disjointed at times, but I can see it going well with rap so I'd give ya like...7/10 or something
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#5
Hehe I like the idea, but the drums and keyboards seem disjointed, and you might wanna work on the sound a bit, so that it is more evenly spread between the left and right...

But it's good man. Keep up the good work.
According to BS statistics, 92% of teens have moved on to rap. If you're among the 8% who doesn't consider rap to be real music, donate your brains, as you clearly aren't using them.
#7
The keyboards are out of time with the drums, the drums go out of time with themselves occasionally, and the stereo efffect was WAY overused. Stereo-ing stuff should be subtle, but effective.

Otherwise, the effects were cool....
#9
Quote by HyperFeedback
how did you do it?


well i recorded the drums,then i record the keyboard wih a setting called Waw Voice on it,then i recorded a alarm setting on the keyboard,got them so u can hear it equally,then for the intro on the drums,i added a Wah and Phaser on Audacity