#3
I like this especially for someone far from this genre. At first you seem to be kind of awkward when pronouncing the words. ( I was reading along with the lyrics) So the melody was unclear because you were trying to get the longer words in. Very good for a first recording though...just need to clean it up a little and let your vocals flow more so the words don't seem so forced.

crit mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=504164
#4
Thanks for the fast response. I'll try and get to your recordings sometime tommorrow.

Edit: Go ahead and add me on myspace if you want.
Last edited by DanteR* at Jan 14, 2007,