#1
This is thrash metal just to be clear. Not doom metal or the other stupid metal genres. Tempo and speed based off of the Metallica song Harvester of Sorrow.
Crit For a Crit

The Doomed Society


Push the button to send them all,
Decimate the land.
Don’t worry ‘bout the rest of us,
And feed the Devil’s hand.

Twisted as his cause
Drowning in the sea
I can see the flaws
Of the doomed society

Dwell in darkness and you shall die,
God call for a ban.
Believe in your all mighty lord,
And give yourself a chance.

Twisted as his cause
Drowning in the sea
I can see the flaws
Of the doomed society

Look deep inside to see your mind.
Corrupted, how sick.
You are just like an evil witch,
Dance around on your stick.

Twisted as his cause
Drowning in the sea
I can see the flaws
Of the doomed society

Any Criticism is appreciated as long as it doesn't say it just plain sucks.
If you would like to know what the song is about just email me and i will tell you.
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Last edited by HillsideMetal2 at Jan 15, 2007,
#2
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#3
1) No bumping
2) only start one new thread in a day, two in a week max. Please delete one of your pieces or theyll be closed, and you won't be able to post again for a week
#4
So what are you going to criticize my work or you gonna give me an explanation of the rules. BTY Some of us have enough talent to write 3 songs in one day and then we can't post them for weeks. That is some BS.
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#5
Quite. Seeing as you can't read the rules, I felt I had to explain them. I shan't critique your piece, seeing as your attitude is also below par.
#7
I believe you need to go and drink your tea and eat your crumpets and stay out of my metal thread and thanks for the explanation of the rules. rule hound
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#8
thanks onlywhatyoucallme. good to see someone appreciates true metal unlike these Punk/emo's. i already have the music it just hasn't been recorded.
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#9
Heh no problem i love the idea and the rhyming is great
and it's so true and that boosts it a bunch

about my diagnosis song...weird song but i figured out you can't post 2 songs in one day or something
LAME
and i threw a tantrum and bit my pillow
heh
not really i actually just said "wtf"

and uh if you want me to i can e-mail diagnosis to you

Peace In
#10
Exactly what I said. But anyways I'll give the basics of Diagnosis. The first couple of Stanzas were kind of misguided but that all depends on the style of music. and the last coulple of stanzas were confusing on the fourth line but that depends on the point you're trying to get across.

And this song is about the Cuban Missle Crisis and Communism. Just some FYI.
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#11
I like that kind of stuff...the whole confusing thing
it makes the listeners/readers think harder and it makes it less boring when listened to over and over...
just me

Reply to my other one *into*

thanks

Peace In
#12
Ok. its good to make people think. If you just spell everything out for them it takes everything away from the song and it is just boring. BTW what kind of music do you play or like.
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