#1
**** you
and your so-called
orginal thoughts
you borrowed it
chopped it up
and made it
seem to rot

It's ****ing worse
then before
and thats
all i can
say


And you
seem to judge me
why don't you talk
because the ****ing things
you do
seem to be
the thoughts of a rock
#2
Quote by Ratmlz
**** you
and your so-called
orginal thoughts
you borrowed it
chopped it up
and made it
seem to rot
I like the start, could use more imagery to get it started, but not bad

It's ****ing worse
then before
and thats
all i can
say
Chorus? don'r know, the flow isn't bad, but sorta lacking information about whats going on...not bad though

And you
seem to judge me
why don't you talk
because the ****ing things
you do
seem to be
the thoughts of a rock
I like this for an ending, again need to elborate more


Maybe this is just me i don't know but you could deffiantly explain more what is going on...

7/10

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