#1
*Disclamer* This poem does not show my view on sex. I do not get off like this, I am not a guro freak.

Raped and played by
God...
Sitting on his high throne laughing
As he left you to ruin
As he left you to turn the seas blood red
No one can help you now
The pleasure of seeing your blood
(Akai)
I can kill you for love...
It's best when it's cold and silent
It feels so right
When you have no arms...
Whith which to struggle
Angels raped and killed "The Lord"
Who alone but he could take away
A reason to live
You have no legs to run with
Next come out the insides
Oh my god it's so warm and it feels so right
Your throat's bubbling red
As I spew my seed
WHERE YOUR EYE USED TO BE
All this love is turning red
[Kill you for love, cut you in lust]
(Arigatou)
#2
you are one messed up 14 yo!

where did you get the idea from?

I presume it is about some demented perv who gets there kicks by killing and then raping dead bodies?

it well written, but just not my cup of tea,

crit mine "Checks & Balances"

peace
#3
Um if this is a hard rock screachy song u got it, but if its a ballad or anything else its creepy

Good song though like Qoasis i like the more deep and less violent songs
#4
Great song about a crazy perv. excellently written for your age im only 15 tho
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#6
Quote by Qoasis
you are one messed up 14 yo!

where did you get the idea from?

I presume it is about some demented perv who gets there kicks by killing and then raping dead bodies?

it well written, but just not my cup of tea,

crit mine "Checks & Balances"

peace


It's fun being messed up, personally I got the idea from a book I read, alot of my inspiration comes from books 'cause I read a TON of them.