#1
This is a song about a girl I went out with for a year. I was in a confused part of my life and I broke up with her for almost no reason. This is my first song I've written. I posted the first version yesterday and I reeally wasn't pleased with it so I worked on it and added a lot to it so here it is.


Heres the revised version...


It seems the anticipation is building with every passing day,
I continue to feel that theres this debt that needs to be paid,
if you only realized the changes in my life
you'd know theres no reason for you not to take me back
and all these things running through my head
I feel this really needs to be said...

Don't you know...
There's more to this
Don't you know
This can't be dismissed
Don't you know
These things should be settled right now

I can't believe I broke things off
like I had no sympathy or remorse
Can't you see it was a bad time in my life
and a definitive imperfect source
Don't you know...
There's more to this
Don't you know
This can't be dismissed
Don't you know
These things should be settled right now

I keep thinking the next weekend theres a chance you might call
but I eventuallly evidence myself to my own reality withdrawal
If we keep this akwardness going that we know is not right
you'll feel the pain more and more as I'll feel this contrite
and all these things running through my head
I feel this really needs to be said

Let's get back
Let's get back
Let's get back to the days where we were here as one
It seems like you were my world
the only thing in the world
I just hoped we would never be done

Let's get back
Let's get back
Let's get back to those nights under the starry sky
where we were huddled close
grasping each other
as the frigid winter air blows

Outro
Here I am laid out for you
with nothing to hide
I've revealed all my thoughts
and stripped myself down
with nothing else to confide
conceive my remarks
with an open heart and open mind
you know this is an act of compensation
that will relieve all of this high anticipation


All constructive criticism is welcomed
#2
Here's another version, tell me which one you like better.

It seems the anticipation is building with every passing day,
I continue to feel that theres this debt that needs to be paid,
if you only realized the changes in my life
you'd know theres no reason for you not to take me back
and with all these things running through my head
I feel this really needs to be said...

Let's get back
Let's get back
Let's get back to the days where we were here as one
It seems like you were my world
the only thing in the world
I just hoped we would never be done

I can't believe I broke things off
like I had no sympathy or remorse
Can't you see it was a bad time in my life
and a definitive imperfect source
Let's get back
Let's get back
Let's get back to those nights under the starry sky
where we were huddled close
grasping each other
as the frigid winter air blows

I keep thinking the next weekend theres a chance you might call
but I eventuallly evidence myself to my own reality withdrawal
If we keep this akwardness going that we know is not right
you'll feel the pain more and more as I'll feel this contrite
and with all these things running through my head
I feel this really needs to be said

Baby girl you burn so brightly
like a fire, in my heart you
know what we had was so amazing Oh...

Baby we girl we really have something
you believe, it can happen
let's just work this out today, Alright...


OUTRO
Here I am laid out for you
with nothing to hide
I've revealed all my thoughts
and stripped myself down
with nothing else to confide
conceive my remarks
with an open heart and open mind
you know this is an act of compensation
that will relieve all of this high anticipation