hey peepz thnx 4 sum of the comments but can u help me 2 get better ideas or just genral help thnx.

u take the pain and pressure
u take my life
all i did was care for u
all i did was care

iv given u all my love
wish i could have given more
cant replace what u have taken
cant replace love u took

when will u learn pain dosent leave
it stays in mind, body, soul
i will always greve

i will always care
it seems i am the only one
now im gunna run
with this life i dnt care

iv written the chorus its the 1st verse at the top
err i need asmuch help as u can give please comment lol
thnx xxx