#1
Hi!

Okay, here is me with my Purple Haze version again, I used the crit I got last time and hope the bends/vibrato's/solo is better now

It sounds a bit empty but when playing with a band or backingtrack that's gone (of course!) And it also covers up my mistakes a bit... hehe

Thursday I'm performing this song with a band (bass + drum) and I'm also gonna sing with it, I am not a professional singer or something (!) neither do I think that I can sing good but we needed a singer to stay in time and I guess my singing isn't really out of tune so we decided I'll sing... Please give some constructive crit on my vocals too!

I screwed up the lyrics a bit in the 3rd verse, forgive me, I'm a bit nervous around recording devices and stuff...


And no, I'm no boy with a weird high voice, I'm a girl


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#2
singing isn't that bad quie good only sometimes you sing me-e instead of me if you know what i mean and that sounds not as cool as jimmi does it but i liked this version?
#3
Yeah you're right, but ehh singing is not my strongest point! But I'll practise it some more!
Thanks for the reply.
#4
The vocals were good.

But there were some missed notes in the beginning. I don't know if you want it to be that way tho.

Also the solo could use some work.


Pretty damn good though
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#5
I'm sorry, what missing notes?

Well I like it this way but I'd still like to know what notes you are talking about!
#6
Not bad but yeh your voice is a bit off but thats only a small problem but overall i liked it
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#8
Well I often play with a backingtrack but I wanted my guitar and vocals to be clear.



Playing it with a band sounds pretty SiCK though
#10
The tone is pretty bad, but the playing is solid. The singing is awful, you need to drop like 52 octaves
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#11
Like people said before, some guitar parts were off, but I assume that was intended, because you said you were playing it "you're" way. Which I commend if thats what your trying to do, because your trying to make it your own, which I believe you suceeded in doing. I've never heard purple haze sung by a female either, and I thought it sounded pretty cool. Honestly, a little practice, and your voice can be there, because you naturally have a nice voice. So dont give up singing because of a few negative comments. But overall, you definately made the song your own, and I would love to hear the recording with the whole band.
crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=504659
#12
Thanks for the crit!
I know my singing isn't perfect.. but I only sing because we needed a singer and the gig is tomorrow (!) I was the only one in the band who could play and sing together and it didn't sound horrible.. so that's why
But I'll practise it!!
#13
good job dude!

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