please post, any contructive critisism welcome! please post!

Cant keep my mind from calling your name
i know that you would never make me change
i can't help but to think that you'll never return
but as they say, good things come to those who wait

your feelings for me were all black and white
but now everything has faded to grey
i can't look at them, fear of what they will say
there's nothing but you that'll keep me the same

this is as far as i've gotten so far...what do you think?
also, any idea of what chords would sound good with this?
If every simple song i wrote
would take your breath away
i'd write it all
Last edited by kaihla at Jan 19, 2007,