#1
Out of my head

INTRO
(Child’s voice)
she loves me, she loves me not,
she loves me, she loves me not…(echoes)

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I can’t get you out of my head
You’re always on my mind
The only reason I smile
The only one who brings me joy…

With out you the sorrow consumes me
The anger surrounds me
The darkness burns my empty soul
But when I see you…

You’re eyes burn right through me
The darkness around me is broken
My whole world is perfect,
Until you leave…

I can’t get you out of my head
You’re always on my mind
The only reason I smile
The only one who brings me joy…

I am always with you
Even when you don’t see me
Silently begging for your attention
But I never get it…

I know you don’t love me
get the out of my head!
You don’t even know me
get out of my head!!
You’re not mine I know
get the out of my head!!!
You must love to torture
Because you won’t get out of my HEAD!!!
#3
"I can’t get you out of my head
You’re always on my mind"

Very Cliche. Aside from that and the fact that theres no rhyme scheme, it's quite a good piece
#4
at first i thought a song called out of my head had to be about getting insanely stoned but maybe not. It was ok i guess, the outro is cool.
#5
again 1 of the first replies "its to cliche" is everyting cliche?

but he is right it doesnt have a rhyme scheme in it, thats a bit of a let down
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