#1
Pretty straight forward, but I really liked it, hopefully you will too --reminds me of a depressed dr. suess....hah anyways...

I call it "Sand Castle" right now, but thats just because i was trying to think of something that relates to the poem, and doesnt last a very long time...

your knees, your hands
your feet, in the sand
heads up, feeling down
eyes shut, sealed, and bound
The pathway to your heart
follows your cheek
streaming river of the grim and bleek
A soul has vanished
a gap in your chest
left you without hope
ambition, and feeling your best
people around, but feeling alone
all because, she isn't home.
70's Japan Greco SuperPower
Amps: '65 TRRI - Peavey Classic 50 4x10 - Epiphone VJ Head (Modded) - 2x12 Celestion Greenback Cab
FX: BK Tube Driver - EH Small Stone - MXR CC
Acoustics: Breedlove ADSM20 - Alveraz 5021 12-String