#1
I think I have a question
If you can answer, Mr. Reaper
We're beating around the bush for so long
How much longer must this go on?
I did my time, I sold my hide
I gave you all your money can buy
I'm free, yet enslaved by your prongs
How much longer must this go on?

"You're born to serve, you've a lot to learn
So much of you can still be burned
Freedom was never yours to yearn
So my son, you just work on.".

I think I have a suggestion
If you can hear, Mr. Preacher
My anthem has become my song
This land is not where you belong
My grand dad's dust still lingers in this soil
We call it heritage, not gas or oil
My people can punish their own wrongs
This land is not where you belong

"Your song's a lie, your pain's a fault
Your fight's not fair, its terrorism for all
Our law states against the discrimination call
Every land is where we belong."

I think I have a proclaimation!
And you better hear me clear mister!
I won't beat around your bush or become a pawn
Someday there'll be a new dawn
In the name of justice I'll fight!
My spear in hand, my cavalry shall ride!
No more fools shall you spawn
Someday there'll be a new dawn

"Raised on my crumbs, you bite my hand
I taught you words, and made you understand
This terror shall be smote, your cavalry torn
With skies in my hand, there'll be no dawn."

I think you expect a confession
Perfectly you can hear, Mr. Executor
As guilty I'm found
Dethroned from honor and bound
Terror I didn't breed, yet my wrath I led
This fight will continue even after my death
I regret being unable to battle head on
Dethroned from honor and bound

"Silence grant consent, your words make you a fool
Your spear you borrowed from satan, you were his tool
Your code of honor and chivalry brought you down
This thump of gavel shall forever hold your sound."

(The End)
Wanna feel divine? Light candles around a dark and abondoned room, then play your guitar.
#2
Wow. Probably one of the best I've read on here. The Mr. Reaper, Preacher, Executor was genious. I completley got the message you were trying to get across in the song. I honestly don't think I can give you any advice excpet for keep up the great work.
So thats the second time I got crabs.
#5
Thanks for the comment, guys. I considered changing the title, but it packs a strong punch with the content. And if I remove it, things 'might' get taken the wrong way or blown out of proportion.

You're all too kind. Rock on, fellas!
Wanna feel divine? Light candles around a dark and abondoned room, then play your guitar.