#1
I think the intonation is a little off on my high e, but i dont have the right tools to fix it right now, so a couple notes sound a tiny bit out of tune during the solo, but nothing huge.



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#2
Well the intro riff is bad, work on it. The next riffs are good. I couldnt hear the complete song I dont know if it was my sh!tty internet or you cut the song. But work on the intro part, the rest is ok.


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