i like it, i like the overall progression of the song. you should keep writing more stuff for it, a solo would be nice too.

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i liked how it started off straight forward and got a little more technically throughout. youve god some really great riffs and harmonies in there i love it. maybe a little simple for my tastes but its really good regardless. keep it up

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