#1
Into My Dreams

Verse 1

You Always Run Away
From All The Problems In Your Life
At The Edges You Start To Fray
Always Hiding From The Lies
Still Looking So Alone
Never Having Nothing To Do
Im Sorry That Your Hardly Known
But I Think
I Can Help You

Chorus

Step Into My World
And You'll See Better Life
I Can Give You This
There Ain't No Need To Hide
So Come Along With Me
And Maybe You'll Begin To See
You Can Come Into My Dreams

Verse 2

No One Gave You The Time Of Day
Always Sittin' By Yourself
You Began To Think
That It's Better That Way
We Never Used To Speak That Much
Now I Wish That We'd Kept In Touch

Chorus

Step Into My World
And You'll A Better Life
I Can Give You This
There Ain't No Need To Hide
So Come Along With Me
And Baby You Will See
You Can Come Into My Dreams
#2
This one was much better. not as cliched and I could feel a rythm in it.
Fender Strat '62 With Clapton signal processor and Fender Lace Sensors
Kustom DFX 100 (2x12)
Fender 150W all tube '64 vintage Amp (2x12)
Influences: Black Sabbath, Metallica, Megadeth

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#3
Thx dude it was nothin a sit down and a proper read thourgh couldn't make a bit better although im still gonna work on it just not tonight its 20 to 2 in the mornin here in scotland and my eyes are wayyy to heavy lol ill work on it tommorow and post it up probably thx