#1
2 songs. I wrote Tumor in less than an hour, so expect some problems with that. Enjoy!
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2 GP5 songs.zip
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#2
I only checked the race one and it's kinda weak. good buildup section before the solo though. It's not very well thought out but i'm sure you can do better.

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#3
lol yeah that song (until today) i just had labeled as "random riff" because i believed that the song was based solely on that riff and nothing else. the only part I like about it is the solo.
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#4
I like the first riff in the race...I just feel it was repeated a bit too much. The part that comes after it is a little weak like csquared said. Not totally unworkable though, just put a little more thought into it.

With tumor I feel like you have a good riff but you seem to milk it a bit too much. It barely changes in the first 2 minutes. Just try to add a bit more variety and it will be a good song.
Oh, and I liked the solo but I'm not much of a lead guitarist so I wouldn't know how great it is.
#5
wow thanks for your input. I know that it repeats alot (the verse) but it sounds MUCH better with vocals and since I like to hold out notes for a while when I sing, it had to be extended (from 2 repeats to 4)
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