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any crit would be appreciated

How insignificant this has all become
This love weve wove has come undone
The ship's set sail, yet here I stand
And it fells like your a thousand days gone
Id give chase but its not my choice
Ill beg forgiveness til ive lost my voice

Close your eyes youll find me there
im underneath the veil you wear
the part of me you wanted the most
has departed leaving only this ghost

The Futility of my actions are severe
youve locked onto my greatest fear
Ill fight my mind from the inside
Break the bonds that held me back
This shade of envy suits me well
Passion or reality time will tell


Close your eyes youll find me there
im underneath the veil you wear
the part of me you wanted the most
has departed leaving only this ghost