So, this is my quick attempt at Hollywood Fix by The Pink Spiders.

Rough? I know. I can't sing, for one.

But, I do have a cold...and my throat hurts...so...yeah.

[/lame excuse to try to make myself seem better than I am]

Anyways, check it out if you'd like.

Crit for crit. =)

[edit] I guess a link would be nice, huh? http://stevenbryant.dmusic.com/

Thanks again. =D
This was actually pretty neat. Generally, I'm not a fan of those type of vocals, but you did well. Good sense of rhythm and timing. Keep it up.