#1
this is my first jump into the blues and I wrote this a couple of days ago, read it over many times, and would like to hear what you guys (and Girls) think about it.

[verse1]
I stepped out of the car
with only a suit and a guitar
and put my feet on the ground
the driver showed me a place to say
and said he'd better be on his way
and I had myself a good look around

[verse 2]
the wind was a breezin'
and the ground was a freezin'
the place was just a heat theif
I needed to hide
to find a place inside
where I could get some relief

[chorus]
'cuz it's cold
'cuz it's so so cold
'cuz it's cold
it's cold cold cold

[bridge]
it's freezin' by the front door
it's freezin out in back
the walls are all tattered
and all the windows are cracked
tryin' to find a place to hide
tryin' to find a place to stay
I asked the neighbors for some help,
but they just said GO AWAY!!!
and I know I'm cold
it's gettin really cold

[chorus]
'cuz it's cold
'cuz it's so so cold
'cuz it's cold
it's cold cold cold
'cuz it's cold
'cuz it's so so cold
'cuz it's cold
it's cold cold cold

alright lets see what you think
#2
Yeah, I can hear it. Works for me. A particularly like the phrase "heat thief", and the bridge part in general.