ok so some of the lines i dont really like but before i change things around how many actually like things so far?

deep flourescent hues make for brilliant highlights/ The scent of our wounds/ Brings dawn to twilight/ The horizon line feeds most of our fires/ While we choke on the ashes as yesterday expired/ Inept to change, like moths to a flame/Dance does the blaze, restless with rage/ Weak is your blade, as it crosses my lips with a tender jolt of pain/ As crimson meets sky/Deep flourescent hues make for brilliant highlights.
Last edited by xDie_Romanticx at Feb 4, 2007,