#1
hey
here is a song to marijuana and getting stoned...oh so common in hippie songs as this one.

Please please tell me what you think. This is really short but the guitar is long and extends it out. this is played on acoustic, kind of a reggae/indie/iron & wine style


xxx

CHORUS
I think I am coming down with a brand new disease
But that is just the price i am paying

This ain't no "Purple Haze" in my brain
But excuse me while i kiss the sky
I keep my secrets behind locked doors
Between the cracks that are in my teeth

Multi-colored smoke swims through my veins
and makes my arteries jump up and down
my heart sings about all the places it has seen
my stomach roars the foods it wants to eat

I think i am coming down with a brand new disease
But that is just the price i am paying
Last edited by Gracen at Jan 19, 2007,
#2
i like it. i can't quite set a beat to it in my head, but i'm bad at that anyway. the lyrics by themselves flow really well. maybe a third verse, but it's still good with two.
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#3
yeah i barely wrote it today...i need to finish it
Last edited by Gracen at Jan 19, 2007,