#1
V1-It's the calm before the storm
Before everything falls apart
And we're left with nothing
But to pick up the pieces

C- It can't stay the same
No matter where we go
There will always be
Obstacles in our way
Preventing us from moving
Slowing our progress...

V2- When the storm has subsided
Will we ever be the same?
Or will we be left to wander
And try to figure these things out

C- It can't stay the same
No matter where we go
There will always be
Obstacles in our way
Preventing us from moving
Slowing our progress...

B/v3- And now that it's over
Where do we go from here?
Will the past repeat itself?
I sure as hell hope not.....

C- It can't stay the same
No matter where we go
There will always be
Obstacles in our way
Preventing us from moving
Slowing our progress...
#2
Nice job, man. I don't really see anything major to fix here. There were no awkward lines or verses, everything flowed, the song progresses well, overall awesome song.
Cause I love feelin' dirty
And I love feelin' cheap
And I love it when you hurt me
So drive those staples deep
#3
all you can change is that this has a weird and scwooey ryhme scheme..
awsome job though, a few minor changes and you're rockin up the stations
UG's HIPPIE
#7
V1-It's the calm before the storm
Before everything falls apart
And we're left with nothing====try changing to, "and then we're"
But to pick up the pieces

C- It can't stay the same
No matter where we go
There will always be
Obstacles in our way
Preventing us from moving
Slowing our progress...===== i dont like this line

V2- When the storm has subsided
Will we ever be the same?
Or will we be left to wander
And try to figure these things out

C- It can't stay the same
No matter where we go
There will always be
Obstacles in our way
Preventing us from moving
Slowing our progress...

B/v3- And now that it's over
Where do we go from here?
Will the past repeat itself?
I sure as hell hope not.....====the word 'hell' takes away from it for somereason here...IMO

C- It can't stay the same
No matter where we go
There will always be
Obstacles in our way
Preventing us from moving
Slowing our progress...
__________________

not really much wrong with it, just like few lines botheres me.couldnt find to mcuh wrong with it. man, everybodys writing great songs now, making it harder to fricken crit thiers...