#1
This is my second song. Its in the style of Indie/Metalcore/Screamo. I like to blend genres (as you can see). Tell me what you think.

ps Yes the title is supposed to be "Where ru?"

Verse

I can't find you
I can't see you
I can't Hold you
Where are you?
Where are you?

You won't call me
You won't listen
You won't stay here
Where am I?
Where am I?

Chorus

What do I have to do to find you? (To find you?)
How do you do the things you do? (Things you do?)

Verse 2

I never held you
I never felt you
I never dealt with your....love (Your love)

You don't worry
You don't hurry
You don't really give a s**t, do you? (Do you?)

Chrous

What do I have to do to find you? (To find you?)
How do you do the things you do? (Things you do?)

WHERE ARE YOU!?!
WHERE ARE YOU!?!
WHERE ARE YOU!?!
WHERE ARE YOU!?!
Last edited by 3rdActguitarist at Jan 19, 2007,
#2
I liked it, the only problem was the flow, put I but simple power chords (EADGBe) and its sounded kinda cool. Hey check mine out will ya?? Its the untitled song
#3
Ok, the lyrics are very repetitive and have absolutely no meaning, other than face value. Try thinking of something else to say other than "where are you?" in various incantations.
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#4
lame

has no meaning

are you playing hide and go seek?

where's the chorus or verses or anything for that matter.
Last edited by skwires at Jan 19, 2007,