#1
For all you guitarists out there, I included tabs and chords because I was too lazy to copy each line individually.

Intro: (10/4)
e|-----------------------------------------
B|-----------------------------------------
G|---------------0-2-0---------------0-----
D|-0-0-2-0-2-4-2-------0-0-2-0-2-4-2-------
A|-----------------------------------------
E|-----------------------------------------

Verse 1: (4/4)
D Dsus4
Are you so blind that you see right through me?
D Dsus4
Why won’t you do what you’re told?
D Dsus4
Are you so deaf that you cannot hear me?
D Dsus4
Has your heart grown cold?

Chorus: (7/4)
Em7
Damn, Jack, get away from me,
A7 Em7
Go away, don’t you come around here no more,
A7
Jack, take off, how many times do I have to say,
A7
Step off!

Instrumental: (4/4)

Em7 A7

To be continued . . .
#2
Oh, I forgot, in between the verse and chorus, there's a little transition, it's Dsus4 - Dsus2 - Asus4 - Em7. Don't be afraid to experiment.
#4
Awesome, thank you, I was going for something like Pink Floyd if they were a band in the fifties and had Supertramp vocals.
#5
Sorry, I had to submit this as a code, seeing as it messed up the chords the other way.

Step Off Jack

Intro: (10/4)
e|-----------------------------------------
B|-----------------------------------------
G|---------------0-2-0---------------0-----
D|-0-0-2-0-2-4-2-------0-0-2-0-2-4-2-------
A|-----------------------------------------
E|-----------------------------------------

Verse 1: (4/4)
D                         Dsus4
Are you so blind that you see right through me?
D             Dsus4
Why won’t you do what you’re told?
D                        Dsus4
Are you so deaf that you cannot hear me?
D        Dsus4
Has your heart grown cold?

Chorus: (7/4)
Em7
Damn, Jack, get away from me,
A7                                  Em7
Go away, don’t you come around here no more,
              A7
Jack, take off, how many times do I have to say,
A7
Step off!

Instrumental: (4/4)

Em7 A7

To be continued . . .
#6
I like it,it is really cool.The whole first verse is awesome!!!Are you ever going to record it onto the internet or something?
#7
And you need a few more verses to make it even better!But like I said,it is awesome!!!
#8
And also, in the intro, each note is a quarter note, and it's at a pretty fast tempo. The verse chords are played with 8th note strums, don't skip any strums, and each chord is two measures long, you can improvise, but make sure each chord stays around that length. The chorus, you can mess around with those chords because that's what I do, but each chord is one measure long. And in the instrumental, the chords are two measures long. I'm probably going to change all the 4's to 8's and cut all the note lengths in half, and also cut the tempo in half.
#9
It will be on my band's myspace, I'm not proud of the three songs I have up there, so once I get some better stuff, I'll put it up. Right now, the songs sound like some psycho mumbling about how his life sucks, though, that's the story of the first album, which we still need to finish recording.