Hey, that's cool. I like the harmonizing. It would be cool if at one point you did all straight 8th notes instead of those triplet things. It would give it a more powerful feel, when added with the right drums and bass and stuff.
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kinda reminds me of vehemence, not bad
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I liked it as an intro, and the harmonized part as a bridge or something in a song, but I found it was the same thing over and over again. Like I said good intro and harmonized parts, but thats it. 4/10 (but 8/10 intro and harmonized part )