so yeah, today.. after hours and hours of constant work on this song, i finally finished it. im not much of a singer, actually.. this is my first time trying, so tell me what you think of that aspect of the song, as well as what you think of the music and stuff. so tell me what you think guys/girls.

any comments are appreaciated.

here it is

the song's name is
"Astray Path"
pretty good i love the intro
My Music
Gibson ES-335
Gretsch Pro Jet
Guild Acoustic
1958 Harmony Hollowbody Archtop
Vox Valvetronix AD50VT
Vox V847A Wah Pedal
Electro-Harmonix USA Big Muff
Danelectro Daddy-O
Boring as hell, it sounds like a song you can make on cokemusic.com
"karma is a simple yet dangerous tango, and a bee stung my testicles yesterday"