#2
Canon Rock was ok, needs some practice. Timing was out in some places. Nice tone though.
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#3
Canon Rock was pretty good, nice tone, what do you use? I thought, bit messy in someplaces but you are definitely good enough to iron that out, also I'd try and take the time to learn the sweeps before the 1st theme properly, they are awesome if you can pull em off.
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#4
I'm using a Fender fat strat, and recording with Tone Port. I can do the sweep that JerryC does, I just wanted to add in a tapping sweep section somewhere in the song. Thanks for the comments, hopefully I can get a full, better recording up soon.
#5
Neil Zaza was pretty poor in my opinion. It just didn't flow well at all. You hit a lot of wrong notes.

Work on your bends. Timing issues too. Need some vibrato also.

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#6
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Neil Zaza was pretty poor in my opinion. It just didn't flow well at all. You hit a lot of wrong notes.

Work on your bends. Timing issues too. Need some vibrato also.

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Thanks for the crit. I am aware that the version I have on myspace isn't too good, that was probably my 20th take. I'll probably get a new one up soon.

Where am I missing vibrato?

Here's a video so you can see me playing. http://youtube.com/watch?v=7258GnfdTlI This was before I got my Tone Port, so the tone isn't too great.

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#7
Work on your bends and vibrato. Other than that, good job.
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