#1
so i started writing this song today. i was wodering if you guys could give me some ideas as to which chords should be changed, removed, etc.

(number above chord means counts)

Verse (all open chords):

2 4 2 4
A D A E X3

2 4 2 4
A D A B7 (the B7 sounds fine, but there's probably something better i can use)

Chorus

4 4 4 4
C#m Bm A E X3 (the E is at the 7th fret to make it sound a little different.)


4 4 8
C#m Bm Dmaj7 (it's just that famous "plush" chord moved back one fret)


pretty simple. if you need a tempo, it's kinda like audioslave's "doesn't remind me"
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#2
no relative minor?? thats F# minor for the key of A btw
mabye try it instead of that B7
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#3
hmm, interesting. i might actually keep the B7 and replace the the Bm with an F#m. i totally forgot about the relative minor, thanks timm.
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neither is great. The Fender is bad though, unlike the Behringer which sounds so bad that it makes you want to stab out your own eardrums with a blunt pencil . hope that was helpful.


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