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I wrote this song kind of to myself when i was feeling... i guess you could say blue. anyway, please tell me what you think about it and how to improve it.

it's called Don't Forget--It's Me
by me, Johnny Hartley

This life is yours to have
To hold
To throw away
A specimen inside a cell
Just don't forget--it's me
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I hate it when you look this way
So unhappy with yourself
Your eyes ready to fade away
Your face an emptied shell
But it's okay now
I'm here
It's okay now
We're here
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These hands are yours to have
To hold
To throw away
Two specimens
Inside a cell
Just don't forget--it's me
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I hate it when you look this way
So unhappy with yourself
Your eyes ready to fade away
Your face an emptied shell
But it's okay now
I'm here
It's okay now
We're here
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So as the tears come flowing
Down your face
Your crippling sadness
Fades Away
You look at me and smile
You look at me and smile
Oh God, it's been a while
(So good to see you smile)