#1
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OhabhZGeJSY

sweet child of mine solo Done my way (some variation)!!

used a backin track!!

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#2
Really good. Amazing tone, but I think you were before or behind the beat in a few spots.

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#3
Needs some work... sounded like some bends were off and sometimes it went out of time. It needs a little more feeling because it's an emotional solo but I think it would be great with some work.
#4
Your tone is kinda dull. You have off bends, and you SERIOUSLY need some vibrato. You have some sloppy runs and missed notes.

Id work on it more, you need practice. Im sure it will be much better next time around
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#5
decent, work on your timing (playing along with the songs helped me), and I would learn it as slahs plays it even without the wah. wiggle the strings a little bit here or there to express emotion, just do it wherever you see fit. Vibrato is your friend
#6
It was alright. The beginning bends need to be bent and released, and you took out alot of the signature licks of the solo. Not bad though.
#7
variation? not much, thats how I play it and I play it the lazy mans way, work on the run, because it was all over the place! got repitative towards the end.. all right I guess..
#8
Bends need to be in and vibrato needs to be added... thats all
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#9
work on your bends. it needs some work, but good job.
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#10
Not bad at all, but a bit too busy...slow some of it down, dwell on some of the bends longer and learn when not to play
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#11
Well keep in mind he's playing it his style, not a Slash-copy. So basically as long as the progression is correct, and the mood of the song is there, its OK. Also, you msut do the same basic things but still..

Great job. I cant even play the solo starting from the fast part (you should know what i mean, if you dont, your a dimwit.
#12
I know, i liked the fact that there were some interesting passing notes in there that differentiate it from the original, but it's important to match the solo with the mood of the song...i personally felt it didn't quite fit and needed a little more subtlety in parts. Lets face it, we all overplay sometimes, and if you've set the video up there's a bit of pressure there so you can end up trying a bit to hard.
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